(solution) Rewrite the following letter. Correct format errors, change

(solution) Rewrite the following letter. Correct format errors, change

Rewrite the following letter. Correct format errors, change out-of-date wording, change negative 3. vocabulary to positive words, and eliminate redundancies.

June 8th, ?14Teresa McGlennon

Niagara County Technologies Company

3111 Saunders Rd.

Sanborn, N.Y., 14132

Dear Ms. Teresa,

This is to inform you so that you will know that we received your letter of June 6th about opening your account for you and in replay to same must advise that we cannot give you credit in our company unless you fill out the enclosed application and forward it to us with your credit references.

Respectfully yours,

Mr. Jim Dandy

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Correcting The Letter Niagara County Technologies Company
3111 Saunders Rd.
Sanborn, N.Y., 14132
8June, ?14Teresa McGlennon
Dear Ms. Teresa,
This is to inform you that we received your letter on…